Sunday, November 23, 2014

Why?

Smoke rose from the underbelly of the city. A bottle skittered across the deserted street propelled by a wind full of empty promises and lack of action. Broken windows, smashed cars, an unresponsive body dangling from the window of a third-floor flat all revealed the consequences of delirious residents acting out of frustration and despair. (55 words)


Prompt words: flat, underbelly, smoke, bottle, delirious

Sunday, November 16, 2014

Maybe She'll Find Mr. Right on the Bus

A pale yellow kimono, once vibrant, like her life, hung on the closet door. A dusty suitcase lay on the bed, the few clothes she owned folded and placed in neat piles inside. Ellen thought the Cowboy was finally the one who would end her aimless travels. Instead, she needed a one-way bus ticket—again.


Prompt words: suitcase, yellow, dusty, kimono, cowboy

Thursday, November 13, 2014

He's Grieved Long Enough

He's Grieved Long Enough

My stepmother called me an amoral virgin during our latest "disagreement." Say what? Is she really that dumb? Is this woman really right for Dad? Somedays I wish she'd checked into a convent and left Dad alone.

 I know I shouldn't feel that way. Dad's in his fifties, and it's been two years since Mom passed. He needs companionship. And—God knows—help around the house. Still, why couldn't her life-path have taken her in a different direction?

Dad seems happy. That's important—if it's true. I worry he's with her to be less lonely, not because he loves her, or even likes her. Maybe I should have moved in with him after Mom died. Maybe then this interloper wouldn't be in our house. Maybe then I wouldn't have these constant headaches worrying about him.

And maybe it wouldn't have made any difference.

She's at the door in her witch's costume cackling at Trick or Treaters. Dad's around the corner stifling a laugh. When she closes the door he lets loose and laughter fills the house—his and my stepmother's. I hold mine in. Try to look unaffected. But I'm not. He's happy. She makes him happy. I need to let go. Let him live his own life. Be happy for him.

The doorbell rings, and Dad puts a throw pillow over his face. "Trick or treat" echoes through the house mixed with a series of muffled chuckles from the pillow. The door closes. The chuckles turn to laughter, and this time I join in.


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From a prompt to use the following in a story: amoral, path, stepmother, convent, virgin.

Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Jack’s Last Stand

Barry received special permission to visit his Grandpa Jack in the prison hospital. It was a desperate move, but a chance Barry had to take. The old man's pineapple-hued skin showed how fast the toxins had invaded his body. He'd refused treatment for the cancer eating his cells. He was a lifer either way, he'd said.

Barry picked up the brown-rimmed bifocals lying on the table next to the bed. A scratch bisected one corner. He scanned the room, first using the upper lens, then the lower. Everything was a blur no matter which section he peered through. Barry didn't know if the old man, who wasn't really his grandfather, would wake long enough to reveal where he'd hidden the jewelry from their last heist. They'd split up after leaving the store, planning to divide the swag later. Barry had managed to make it to Mexico, where a little money spent in the right places kept the police from arresting him. Unfortunately, a flat tire halted Jack's escape. Barry’d managed to follow Jack’s condition through friends of friends who were in and out of the same prison for the past ten years.

Barry walked to the window to stretch his back. He noticed a '69 Dodge Charger in the parking lot, same model he’d used to get across the state line. This one was black instead of his bright yellow with blue lightning bolts beauty. Seeing the one below, he regretted having driven his car into that lake somewhere in Tennessee on his way south from West Virginia. It was the best car he'd ever owned.

Jack groaned. Barry twisted toward the dying man, waited a few seconds, then rotated back to the window. “Grass is all brown, Jack.” He walked to the bed. “Going dormant. Just like you, old man.” He sat on the edge of the stained, brown chair and took Jack's hand in his. “We had quite a run, didn't we?” Barry leaned in and lowered his voice. "But now it's time to give it up, Jack. You gotta tell me where the stuff is. I understood why you wouldn't do it up to now, hoping you might somehow get out of here, but it's over for you.” Barry squeezed the wrinkled hand. “Even you got to see that." The old man remained silent. Barry grabbed the tube going into Jack's nose and pinched. Jack’s eyes opened wide.

"What was that? What'd you say, Jack?”

Barry put an ear close to the man's lips. "Say it once more."

"Go to hell, kid. You never were any good at nothing."

Barry squeezed harder on the tube. His knuckles turned white.

"Let it go, son," an unfamiliar voice said. "It's over."

Barry turned. Two policemen stood in the door. One held a yellowed pillowcase with mildew spots.

"I believe this is what you came for." The cop pulled a gold and diamond bracelet from the sack. “Jack told us where the stuff was. Said he knew you’d be here when the nurse told him his grandson was coming for a visit. Said he’d rather we have it than you.”

Barry glared at Jack. "You turned me in?" Barry reached down and grabbed Jack by the neck. Four hands clasped Barry's arms and yanked him away.

"You think I didn't see you put some of the small stuff in your pockets?" Jack placed a hand on his neck. "You think I didn't know you were the anonymous tipster who called the police and told them where I was going?” Jack's breathing quickened. “I ain't that stupid." He coughed, spit up blood and lifted a middle finger, as the officers dragged Barry out of the room.

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

He Said/ She Said

Jayne Martin issued a writing challenge to pen a he said/she said story based on one she put on her blog. In it a husband is urging his wife to get ready so they won't be late to his parents. When she resists, he leaves the house to wait in the car. Here's my take on finishing the story.

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He said, "I wasn't sure you'd come."

She said, closing the car door, "I wasn't either, especially after the way you slammed the screen door when you left."

He said, "I was upset."

She said, "With me? For being late? There was a lot more anger in your voice than the other times."

He said, "I know. I'm sorry. I guess I'm not over losing the baby yet, either."

She said, soft fingers on his sleeve, "Like your mom and dad. They always make me feel so awful—inadequate."

He said, "They don't mean to."

She said. "I know, but . . .

He said, "Once we're pregnant again, they'll settle down."

She said with a shrug, "I hope so."

He said, "Wanna start trying again? It's been six months."

She said, "You mean now?"

He said, "Sure why not."

She said, "What about your parents?"

He said with a wink, "Screw my parents."

She said with a naughty grin, "I'd prefer you screw me."

He said, one foot out the driver's side door, "Last one naked's a rotten egg."

She said, "Hey! You cheated."